February 8 Critiques

Griffis

-a little faster tucker, I think you are setting the pace for our show

-you can be effective without going soooo slow

-Mac you are going too slow as well

-Sam you are doing great work!!

-Jonah I'm seeing less Jonah and more Kilroy... Good job!

-Kylie you are amazing. Don't anticipate kilroy's answer.

-Mac make sure Casanova has as much swag at the end as he does the first time you talk to Kilroy

-Evan you are moving too quick as lord mulligan, first appearance

-Kylie don't anticipate Sydney taking white flowers

-Sydney you have to realize purse is gone, don't just say line

-Jonah blink light randomly. make sure we know you are doing it and it's not just blinking.

-jonah's golden gloves need to be in bag if not on him. They would never be left in siege mares

-sing leaving on a jet plane in English

- add in throwing good before festival instead of Mac just hitting cane

-keep having a fiesta and dancing as Mac and Jonah say goodbye

-kadyn, you have to say "is that all?" FUNNY

-Sydney and Evan should be on stage as soon as Sam says block 14

-Ashlynn move to side as soon as sirens end

-Jonah good job in block 16

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Maky – vamoose louder.  Blow on gun when re-entering your house.

Someone needs to pull out bench for Jonah? ??\

Do not freeze during Jonah and Tucker’s last scene.

Amy & Payton – move and talk older

More people noises after fritos

Riley – work on Spanish – see Mia

Streetcleaners – costumes?  Give me the mask that is not painted.

Tucker – scream louder when dying  Have to have a lot more noise

Wind after narrow steep way

Kadyn – sing after that is all

Piping after I’m sick

Kadyn sings after Ja- ask Reagan M

Whispering after – smile tonight on the last cavaliers

Need to pronounce violets sweeter because sounds like violence

More of a change in Esmeralda – be bigger and flirtier

Quixote walk over to the fountain faster

Work on birdcall

Payton’s laugh sounds too girlie

Survivor – grunt more

Kylie and Tucker – we need to change your dance space

Fight dance needs work to make it smoother

The guard missed entrance – needs to already be out listening suspiciously to Cass & K.

Raymond & lady M need to make noise before entering.

Marg – your  vocabulary….. DICTION say out of date instead of place.

K & Cass do the brother thing during the dance.

Marg and young man need people noises before entering.

Freeze when Jonah and Kadyn run into each other.

Sing leaving on a jet plane in English and louder and DICTION

Freeze when Mac says crowned to the world.

Elijah, great freeze

I’m faced with three problems. – move – we will do this in class. – ask Grace

Fugitive patsy scene – couldn’t tell anyone was frozen

Kadyn – freeze during Mac’s crowned to the world.

Freida’s

Everyone – be involved in the dream

                        Not vocalizing what is happening

            Whispering throughout dead spaces

            Whispering before music at the end

Brooke – bend knees and be weird – not like a flute player – but it sounds great

Gutman laugh more

Freezes are still not working

Quixote – pebble in shoe

More bird sounds

See Quixote look about whom to choose

Sleep – Cassanova – make all references to dreams and sleep bigger and dreamier.

That applies to everyone.

Cass – more movement in arms at the beginning

Call people by names

Everyone laugh about patsy

More relationship between K and Cass

React more to purse

At the end – everyone help pass the ladder for Q & K  Go to well, stop, look at Q, pass the ladder then run to well

There must be highs in each block before the Muerto scene.

Kilroy – too profile, needs more strength in legs.

Kil – never got to me – from heart

Marg – attitude – to heck with honor

Marg – left without chew

Hats and umbrellas – need to see faces.

Kilroy & E – hand on leg, traveling, she moves to stop him, then changes her mind.

Gyp – throw tarot cards up and to back.

Marg and Kilroy – heads up at the end.

Brooke – use flute as a tool

Mine

STEP N LINES

Need to hear Kadyn before she comes out as survivor.

Payton hiding from guard was great

Light on Cass – pariah dog

People noises

K – one true woman – see her

Kylie – hold Jonah????

Shanghaied to audience

Caps for inspectors

Seem tired – must be more there – Cass and E

After fugitive – Cass – start line earlier because we are waiting for La Madrecita. La Mad- start singing while changing.  Forget the lines.

Red wash – dance

Mother has awful time on street – jump at shots fired

Step on lines Esmeralda and Kilroy

Kadyn – work on Is that all

What happened to bread scene?

Need

Crystal ball

Ten dollars

Blood on sheet

Flat sheet

Whisper after block 13

2 planks

Slip

Skirt and shirt Ashlynn