Sunday, February 28, 2016
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Saturday, February 27, 2016
February 27 - comment on this before Sunday's rehearsal.
Themes – desperation, decay, dead end, death row, darkness –
love Ashlynn’s the River Styx
Style – not realism
Bodies need to match the metaphor
Speak like it’s poetry
Work in an emotional level
Opening – louder and longer
Quixote –absorb the environment- your lines were delivered
the same with same pauses. Be a little
faster
Gutman- bigger, lower register, DICTION
Prudence – hat?
Gypsy – show a poster of Esmeralda – to fix and gray hair.
Villagers were very good, but need stylization
The audience can see people backstage on right stage.
DICTION FOR EVERYONE
Each block must build – have a climax
Look at groupings
Streetcleaners – more mysterious
Stylized moaning
Kadyn – sing beginning with Amy’s Camino Reel through
Cassanova’s dreams.
Cassonova – more resonance, deeper, be larger, be a lothario
You paused too long with one of your lines with Marguerite
(honor)
Stage lights were off in gypsy scene – shining on wall and
did not cover Cassanova’s face left stage.
Gypsy – lower pitch, slow down
Villagers must be stylized before Kilroy’s entrance –
villagers loosely with palms open
Kilroy – voice and body must match – lower register
Kilroy – rush to Cassanova after guard exits.
Guards – kylie and evan – you both have happy feet and are
swaying.
Everyone – note the first mention of death
Everyone – don’t react normally
Streetcleaners must be stylized
Stylize the fighting dance
Is there an outside force?
Be more aware of the fear of death – fear of terra incognita – the audience
A sense of fear must permeate the stage.
Cassanova and Kilroy – important that we need to know about
what happens to the dead people
Gutman –build on bocks.
Gutman – hold up patsy uniform
Chase must be a stylized dance. Villagers are a barrier between Kilroy and
Esmeralda. She tries to get to him, so
she climbs onto the well.
Rehearse with rebellious music
Rehearse with frightening music
Marguerite’s scene – bring downstage
Cassanova – more birdlike – flowing hands – be a player
Blocks – see red light more
Departure on Fugitivo – the other side is heaven – react accordingly. Vocals are muddied
Block 10 interact with flashing lights – helmets?
Block 10 – no one was there.
Personalize the fiesta
Villagers and Kilroy – stylize the disrobing
How big is your heart – dicton
Shooting downstage –survivor – 2 clear shots. Guards be more threatening.
Marguerite – loved the barring of your teeth – looked crazy.
Ritz light was not on – neither was the yellow light.
Gypsy – virginity line was said upstage and we lost it. Slow
down on the Walgreen sign – it was funny.
Block 12 – no one was there.
Kadyn – need for you to sing.
Don’t forget new lines
Sydney and evan – What else do I have that you want? Nothing
Sam – desperation – with cash here without cash there.
Payton – sing right after leaving on a jet plane and through
not without me
Block 15 during madrecita and instructor
CUTS –
On page 19 cut from Gutman’s line about desperation – clock will
still light up – go to Block 9
On block 12 – cut after vamoose- go to block 13
Block 13
Kilroy – cut gimme a cot.
Kilroy – Cassanova- cut after I understand, Brother- go to
Block 14
Marguerite & Kilroy – cut I wasn’t expecting that
music Keep the streetcleaners are coming
for me. The gypsy told me.
Marguerite – cut thanks for taking mine.
Marguerite & Kilroy – cut lines about street being
royal.
Kilroy’s entrance –The suitcase is going to be on top of the
blue suitcase under the cage – I think. At the end, Kylie grab Kilroy’s
suitcase and hand it to him.
Friday, February 26, 2016
Thursday, February 18, 2016
Monday, February 15, 2016
Clinic - Write blog comment for February15 and February 14 (seebelow)
Everyone
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Read the critiques for February 14
Be involved
Care
You want to be successful in s urvinging.
Everyone must connect
We must see the struggle
Be honest – be in the moment – don’t act like you
are acting
Become the character
Step on lines.
Why do you enter and why do you exit?
Discordant notes – Casanova looks at suitcase,then
announces KILROY!
Reread the script.
Everyone needs to struggle for the audience to care.
You should not be visiting backstage.
Cheat out to audience throughout show.
Fewer whistles and more whispers with wind –
especially at the beginning.
Look at videos of the pope in Mexico or when he was
in NYC – people revered him and just wanted to touch the hem of his
gown. Do this with La Madrecita.
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Kilroy
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Watch arms throughout play. Do not make gestures below the waist.
Hold up a pic of your one true love at the
beginning.
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Prologue & Block 1
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Everyone
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Everyone move a little because the dreamer has to
move to play the guitar & Brooke’s hand moves – guard smokes
Ashlynn cries
Rosita – a little crazy something – maybe counting
money and put it in your bra. I have a story to tell you about this.
Gypsy, look at your cards. Sydney, scratch, etc.
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Villagers
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Must be creepy – sleep, crawl toward Quixote, then
back.
Loteria and tacos must be said with fritos.
Forgot to whisper sleep.
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Survivor
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Have purpose to returning to the well after you are
shot.
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Guard - Riley
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The second time – you say what do you want, say it
differently from the first time.
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Elijah
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Go back through the play and see where dreams,
sleep, heart – words are said and play then.
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Gutman
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Louder throughout.
Many times you have to be heard over incidental noise.
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Quixote
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Body and voice need to be older
Work on faded ribbon line.
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Prudence
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Stumble, be confused, unsettled
A dream is nothing to live in – work on stressing
this.
You don’t hear the first announcement so don’t look
at Gutman when he says it.
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Casanova
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Sleep and wake remember your eyes. We need to see
you repulsed by Prudence.
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Block 2
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Everyone
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React to dry fountain.
Don’t anticipate the shooting
Everyone is hungry for hermano – a connection –
sometimes no matter how hard life is – if you have someone to talk to, it is
not as hard.
Kilroy’s entrance – discordant noise, Casanova sees
suitcase, announces Kilroy and Kilroy is wearing his gloves.
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Madrecita, dreamer, survivor, villagers
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Must see you connect.
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Rosita
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See your hands on everyone in different ways. Maybe be mystified by shoes.
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Marguerite
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Read February 14 critiques.
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Casanova
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Stress brother
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Kilroy
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Look at survivor and jump when she falls in the
wheelbarrow.
Run back to Casanova after guard has exited.
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Gutman
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Excellent job with boxing gloves when you have a
line.
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Survivor
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Voice needs to show being tired and
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Lady Mulligan
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Your body needs to match your voice and attitude.
Why do you exit?
Need to wear a hat
Vocals need to be older.
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Block 3
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Kilroy and guard =good
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Everyone
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Fight dance – get there sooner.
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Gypsy
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Watch sing song pattern
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Dreamer
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Excellent job with music on recuerdos.
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Guards
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Watch swinging arms – weakens characters
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Kilroy
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What did I get myself into? Bigger
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Casanova & Kilroy
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Change positions – C upstage and K more downstage
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Block 4
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Kilroy
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This place is confusing. Nothing seems real – concerned curious
something is real strange. Examine shoes.
Watch being too presentational – my fault – lines to
audience.
What do they do with the stiff – terrified
You treasure your gloves – maybe more than your
woman. Resist when Gutman takes them.
When you are sitting on the well, blinking your
nose, look at the pic of your own true woman.
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Street cleaners
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When taking off the Baron’s shoes, creep over and
touch Kilroy’s.
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Block 5
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Everyone
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Work on suitcase throw – two people mentioned this.
Don’t throw it on Gutman’s platform.
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Cassanova
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Emphasize vital organs unique in size to explain
forshadowing.
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Madrecita deamer
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Look at the dry well.
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Everyone
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Check the well – sad that there is no water.
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Block 6
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Sound effects
guards
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Shots need to be sooner and coordinated with
movement.(block 2?)
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Gutman
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More natural phone hangup with Generalisimo. Louder
on phone.
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Gypsy
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Quieter when Gutman is on phone.
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Esmeralda, Gypsy, Nursie, Abdullah
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We need to hear you before we see you.
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Gutman and Casanova
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When Casanova gets the letter, make sure Gutman is
not blocked.
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Dreamer
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Remember you were great in this block and see how
you can apply this to all blocks.
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Abdullah
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When you are laughing about port of entry – keep laughing
off stage each time you exit. Need for
you to exit stage left sometimes.
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Villagers
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Kilroy says let me go so he can escape to the terra
incognita and the villagers want him to stay and be the hero.
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Sydney
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Stiff – couldn’t hear you
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Kilroy and Esmeralda
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In your scene together, Kilroy watch blocking the
violet light on Esmeralda’s face.
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Dreamer
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Better about being more involved.
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Everyone
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Freeze doesn’t work with Kilroy and Esmeralda. Everyone in motion. ONLY Kilroy and
Esmeralda stop and look at each other.
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Block 7
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Marguerite and Casanova
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Work on the relationship. The “new” stuff you tried today needs to
carry over into each scene you are in.
Walk on line – boy didn’t take it.
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Everyone
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Someone pick up flower that Marguerite drops.
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Mulligans
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Work on the relationship
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Marguerite
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Put purse down – get compact out – they called me
Camille – keep talking – go to put compact out. Look at floor first. Then all around.
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Gutman
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Curdles my blood – work on this. Sounds memorized.
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Block 8
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OK
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Block 9
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Everyone
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More desperate
Struggle
Push pull fight to get over ladder then exhilarated once
you are past demonic inspectors.
Fugitive scene – you don’t care if your skirts are up.
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Casanova
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Don’t fix crown when Gutman puts it on you.
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Prudence
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Girdle line needs to be louder and use diction.
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Gutman
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Don’t listen to Fugitivo – ask Reagan M. She and I
discussed it and I can’t remember it.
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Pilot
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Louder
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Block 10
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Marguerite & Cassanova
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Work on the relationship. The “new” stuff you tried today needs to
carry over into each scene you are in.
Stay in light.
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Kilroy
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Don’t let feet hang off stage.
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Gutman
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Be sure your feet are never hanging off edge of
platform
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Block 11
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Fiesta – dancing in, out, in, out – Evan and Brooke
fix this.
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Block 12
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Fountain dry – react
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Gypsy
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Freida didn’t like the way you sat
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Kilroy
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React –Your number is up
Be scared and more vulnerable when Gypsy is giving
you your fortune.
Keep the self centered winner cocky attitude
throughout the whole play.
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Esmeralda
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Work on the first
Delivery of is that all was good.
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Kilroy
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Sleep under stars sounded memorized.
Work on getting up like Lord Mulligan and Survivor –
ask them to model this for you.
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Block 14
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Marguerite and Cabana boy – enter talking and
laughing. We need to sense something
is wrong.
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Casanova
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Move suitcase bench for Kilroy.
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Kilroy
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Die with head toward right stage.
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Street Cleaners
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Come in creepier toward Kilroy
End of scene didn’t work.
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Block 15
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Madrecita
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Sounded memorized.
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Block 16
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Fade out sound?
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Kilroy
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Just not jest
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Women
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Moving ladder needs to be graceful.
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Dreamer
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Kilroy says dream three times and I want you to
play.
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Quixote
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Enter left stage of the clock to begin last scene.
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Need
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Shoes for everyone
Blanket for Ashlyn- trique
Spray paint Ashlyn’s white skirt.
Find my red wire basket!!!!
I want all villagers to have cage like baskets, etc. |
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