Sunday, February 14, 2016

February 14 Critiques - Comment #1 for 2nd 6 Weeks


February 14, 2016

No rehearsal Monday night because of playoff game

Everybody
Step on lines
Wind at the end of the play.  See bottom of this sheet.
Desperation is evident at the beginning with the survivor, but the village is not as desperate after that.
React when La Madrecita comes in.  Revere – almost worship her.   She is the patron saint of Mexico which makes sense that Williams put her in the play.
Be louder when Baron dies.
Loan shark – Amy hold sign up.  Brooke try to sell A Ratt something.
No one reacts to la madrecita.
Don’t let light flicker
Someone move bench for Jonah when he is too weak
During all chase scenes – whistles
Teresa and Kyle loved the music – Brooke, Elijah, Kadyn and Ashlynn.
At the beginning, more whispering and less whistling.
Have clown suit ready to go. Gutman, hand him the nose before the suit so he can put it on earlier.
Do not unfreeze until after mac hits the last beat on the cane.
Streetcleaners
When Jonah says don’t look at me, touch his shoes, look at him and walk off.
Giggle like demented crazy people.  Move your hands in weird ways.  Move bodies in weird ways .
Watch blocking Kadyn when picking her up.  Both of you be on upstage side of her.
Villagers
Hold onto Kilroy because he says let me go.
Cassanova
React after discontinued.
Guards
Need to be tougher.  Ask Tucker to show you how to shoot.
Gutman
Be louder during the entire show.
Loved the stuff with the glasses when Kilroy gets his heart.
Rosita
Point with upstage hand to Siete Mares.
Quixote
Start your first line earlier.
Ola?????
Kilroy
When Madrecita asks recuerdos which means memories – how should you react to a blind woman?  She can’t see y ou shaking your head.
Don’t say Me too like a question before a real hard kiss.
Look sad when Gutman takes your gloves off.
Wear your gloves when you come in.
Speed up lines and vary speed – overall much better.
Bird twice at the beginning then after wild birds in cages.
What have I got – step on line before.
Run back to Cassanova when guard exits.
Heartbreak – hear vocals like you are dying.
Fall with your head going right stage.
Lady Mulligan
Line to audience when you are with Lord Mulligan.
Esmeralda
Have veil messed up.  When mom comes in.
I have to buy Velcro so I won’t have dress fixed tomorrow.
 
Prudence
More noise or breathing.  React louder to Ashlynn.  Older
Look at you tube 101 dalmations Cruella de vils outburst scene.
Stay frozen after first dance.
Don’t cut mac’s lines off.
Gypsy
Clean your gun for stage business.
Whoop after your gunshot.
Marguerite
Stiff in number 7 too early
Almost out of DATE as…..
Take out compact when you say it’s always a pink one… put purse down so that you can hold flower and compact.  Talk to the compact.
Don’t forget to get jewelry tomorrow.
Cabana boy & Margarite
Entrance was late and you need to make noise coming in.
Time
Faced with three problems -9 min 30 sec.
Jacque how are we going to leave 19 min
I promised mother I wouldn’t -28:30
Elijah
A strum or something with these words – dream heart sleep
Be frozen during the french lady
Do not be in front of Kilroy at the end.
Just like a dream – 3 times so play then.
One true woman – freeze.
Gunshots
Need to be louder
Fade out plane noise & it was too loud.
Sam
Laugh in the beginning - louder
Lady Mulligan
cigarette
Needs
Hat for A Ratt
Hats for Demons
Blanket
Brooke skirt

SOUND CUES

AT BEGINNING –
 
DREAMER PLAYS 2 MEASURES
WHISTLE AND WORDS
It serves to remind an old knight of distance he has gone and distance he has yet to go.
 
HARSH BIRD CRY
CAGES
 
WHISTLE AND WORDS
SLEEP SLEEP SLEEP
 
DREAMER PLAYS  MEASURE
 
LONELY ALONE
 
HARSH BIRD CRY
PRUDENCE:WHAT
 
KADYN SINGS THROUGH DREAMS
CASS - A dream is nothing to live in, why it’s gone like a….(
 
KADYN SINGS
OFFICER SHOOTS AFTER ROSITA’S PLENTY TO DRINK IN SIETE MARES
 
CUE 1
GUTMAN The public fountain is dry, but the Siete Mares was erected over the spring and that has to be protected…sometimes by…martial law….
 
WHISTLE AND WORDS
BLOCK 4
 
DREAMER PLAYS  MEASURE
 
KILROY
Don’t look at me.  I’m not about to take no ride in the barrel!
DREAMER PLAYS 2 MEASURES
 
BLOCK 6 ABDULLAH
I GOT HER
CUE 2 SHOTS FIRED
BLOCK 7
GUTMAN THAT IS ALL
DREAMER PLAYS 2 MEASURES
 
GUTMAN
THE ANSWER IS YES
DREAMER PLAYS 2 MEASURES
BLOCK 8
BLOCK 8
WHISTLE AND WORDS BIRD CRY
GUTMAN
NO PERMANENT GUESTS
WHISTLE AND WORDS
DREAMER PLAYS
BLOCK NINE ON THE CAMINO REAL
 
CUE 5 PLANE
CASS
MARGUERITE LET HIM GO
LEAVING ON A JET PLANE
CUE 6 PLANE LEAVING
BLOCK 10
 
FLICKERING LIGHTS
FOG
BLOCK 11
AND GREAT LOVER
GYPSY & GUTMAN PUT LIGHT ON CASSANOVA
 
 
 
DREAMER PLAYS DANCE
BLOCK 12 GYPSY
ADIOS HA HA
CUES 7 & 8 SHOTS
BLOCK 14  GUTMAN
BLOCK 14 ON CAMINO REAL
DREAMER PLAYS 3 MEASURES DURING LONELY LINES
BLOCK 16 KILROY
THAT’S MINE
CUE 9 SHOTS
GUTMAN
PROPERTY OF STATE
CUE 10 SIRENS ETC.
 
 
DREAMER AT END
 
 
 
AT BEGINNING –
 
DREAMER PLAYS 2 MEASURES
WHISTLE AND WORDS
It serves to remind an old knight of distance he has gone and distance he has yet to go.
 
HARSH BIRD CRY
CAGES
 
WHISTLE AND WORDS
SLEEP SLEEP SLEEP
 
DREAMER PLAYS  MEASURE
 
LONELY ALONE
 
HARSH BIRD CRY
PRUDENCE:WHAT
 
KADYN SINGS THROUGH DREAMS
CASS - A dream is nothing to live in, why it’s gone like a….(
 
KADYN SINGS
OFFICER SHOOTS AFTER ROSITA’S PLENTY TO DRINK IN SIETE MARES
 
CUE 1
GUTMAN The public fountain is dry, but the Siete Mares was erected over the spring and that has to be protected…sometimes by…martial law….
 
WHISTLE AND WORDS
BLOCK 4
 
DREAMER PLAYS  MEASURE
 
KILROY
Don’t look at me.  I’m not about to take no ride in the barrel!
DREAMER PLAYS 2 MEASURES
 
BLOCK 6 ABDULLAH
I GOT HER
CUE 2 SHOTS FIRED
BLOCK 7
GUTMAN THAT IS ALL
DREAMER PLAYS 2 MEASURES
 
GUTMAN
THE ANSWER IS YES
DREAMER PLAYS 2 MEASURES
BLOCK 8
BLOCK 8
WHISTLE AND WORDS BIRD CRY
GUTMAN
NO PERMANENT GUESTS
WHISTLE AND WORDS
DREAMER PLAYS
BLOCK NINE ON THE CAMINO REAL
 
CUE 5 PLANE
CASS
MARGUERITE LET HIM GO
LEAVING ON A JET PLANE
CUE 6 PLANE LEAVING
BLOCK 10
 
FLICKERING LIGHTS
FOG
BLOCK 11
AND GREAT LOVER
GYPSY & GUTMAN PUT LIGHT ON CASSANOVA
 
 
 
DREAMER PLAYS DANCE
BLOCK 12 GYPSY
ADIOS HA HA
CUES 7 & 8 SHOTS
BLOCK 14  GUTMAN
BLOCK 14 ON CAMINO REAL
DREAMER PLAYS 3 MEASURES DURING LONELY LINES
BLOCK 16 KILROY
THAT’S MINE
CUE 9 SHOTS
GUTMAN
PROPERTY OF STATE
CUE 10 SIRENS ETC.
 
 
DREAMER AT END
 
 
 

4 comments:

  1. I'll work on being louder, especially when speaking over a crowd. The play is starting to come together! #gettounder40

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  2. I need to work on always saying ola in the beginning instead of hello

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  3. I need to for sure say my lines to the audience. I always speak directly to the person i amm talking but need to be more profile.
    -Brooke

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