Everyone
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Maybe
the crowd could freeze first time gypsy makes announcement, then wild
cheering
Crowd
laugh bigger when Sam hands him clown costume
Never
touch curtains-
If
we do ladder downstage that way, they must use the ladder in same way each
time.
Work on transition to dances and after dances.
Look at Sydney as the villager. These people are odd – you look like high
school girls.
People noises throughout.
Freezes need to be consistent.
Whistles and whispered words before lights or dialogue
starts at the beginning. THIS MUST BE
LOUDER.
Wind as Marguerite exits.
Screams – louder and longer
We need names in the beginning. Insert those.
Engage with the gypsy
Too many villager straight lines.
Villagers can go DS and have backs to the audience.
Everyone needs to be desperate.
Get rid of the tubes.
Shoes, someone do downstage, see a pair of shoes, take off
yours and put new ones on.
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Amy
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I
have to believe you’re old. Watch old people and imitate.
Look
at the Dalmation show – Cruella DeVille.
Weeser on Steel Magnolias
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People right stage
|
You
need to be in the show.
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Sydney
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Hysterical
during Fugitivo.
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Cassanova and Kilroy
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Too
2016
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Elijah
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Use
music as transition and when there is no dialogue. We may have to shift the cues.
We
need some kind of music during Abdullah’s dance.
Music
during the dances.
Look
like you are writing a song at times.
Play a few notes and write it down.
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Tucker
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Don’t
look at the audience except when you are supposed to.
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Riley
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Need
a shot glass for Cassanova.
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Lights
|
Red
light on first dance.
Blue
on Fiesta.
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Villagers
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Need
a purpose coming on stage and exiting.
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Maky
|
Be
on 4 X 8 – not eligible.
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Sam
|
When
there is a crowd, speak up
Turn
your light on.
Watch
the beat each time you say the number – vary that.
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Brooke
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Exit
in character
Be
snobbier. Even your walk should be like a stuck up lady.
We
need to laugh when you say "put lord mulligan on dry ice" maybe We
could give you a funny shrill voice"
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Jonah
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Enunciate.
Try to stop swaying as you speak.
Be
BIGGER than life. Make us love you, laugh with you, and feel your pain.
Look
even more confused after the first dance. grab your heart when Mac says
"vital organs unique in size"
HERE
needs to be written large.
Be
sure you cheat so that judges don't see profile
Not
so Texan.
Be
more curious about where you are.
Learn
your lines.
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Jonah and Riley
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Didn’t
believe your confrontation.
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Mac
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Be
terrified of the letter
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Kylie
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You
are blocking scene in fugitivo
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Sydney
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I
want to feel your desperate craziness after fugitivo. You are CRUEL to him
and he loves you anyway.
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Sunday, January 24, 2016
January 24 Critiques
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are there scenes where we (villagers) could interact with maky?? because yesterday I was thinking that would make sense
ReplyDeleteAny scenes. Especially when Maky says not relevant or something like that. She is the gypsy in each scene, so it would help out if you reacted with her.
ReplyDeleteI still feel that we should work with carrying the wheelbarrow especially when people are dancing while we are trying to move it...
ReplyDeleteamy i think you should watch how old people walk and try to walk more like an old lady.
ReplyDeletemaky, vary your voice. in almost everything you say, it is very loud, and then trails off at the end of the phrase.
ReplyDeleteI think abdullah and the gypsy should react more to eachother to show relationship between a mother and son
ReplyDeletegross noises and weird grunting could help the village people be weirder
ReplyDeleteI think we should be able to dance, without everyone staring at Evan or Brooke, soon so if seems more natural
ReplyDeleteI will work as hard as I can to get my lines down, also I feel like I need to get my character down and make it stronger.
ReplyDeleteI'll work on different styles of saying the blocks. Glad to see this play coming along!
ReplyDeleteJust work on looking distorted, everyone looks natural. Otherwise everyone is awesome!
ReplyDeleteI think we need to work on the dancing scenes. Great job!!!
ReplyDeleteCan we please go over all the times you want us frozen, also I'm kinda confused about when we can hear the other characters and when we're oblivious to what's going on outside of our characters lives. We need to work on reacting better, and constantly being engaged
ReplyDeletedefinitely need to work with fugitivo scene. I think there are too many people on stage. it's really crowded
ReplyDeleteWhen the crowd screams or laughs together try not to sound the same as the person next to you
ReplyDeleteI think the fugitivo scene needs some work we need to have more catfights and not be afraid to push and shove the fugitivo is are only way out so of course we will be fighting to get out
ReplyDeleteWhat kind of music do I need for abdullahs dance?
ReplyDeleteAmy and Tucker need to make their voices age with their bodies also payton make your voice sound creepy as does everyone. It is really coming along, great job!
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