At the beginning, start together – lights and
whispering/music
-The noise before block one was whispering. We didn’t
have it.
Block 2 hold wings so that we do not see the stick.
Gun shots have to be loud and on time.
What happened to fritos, tacos, lotteria? This is the only way villagers can make
money. We have to see the desperation in
their struggle to survive.
When lights are on the men only, the streetlight needs to
be on as well.
- freeze on dreamer
-Kilroy light needs to come on just as he enters
Kilroy = cheat out on hard kiss.
- fight dance needs work
- Jonah wear boxer belt
- Jonah has to react to that gun shot
- Jonah don't throw down hat until Kylie says #7 is
vacant
- Jonah react more to riley as nursie
- no boobs on kadyn
-Elijah don't play while people are saying lines
- Jonah blink once early during c & m scene, not
repeatedly during scene
- Elijah play frog with meaning= rhythm
- Peyton has to go over ladder
- Brooke where's your hat as lady mulligan?
- Brooke needs to age voice
- Mac has to do poetic Casanova voice as a constant or
not at all. Can't come and go
- sensual dancing
- disguise
- Sam don't hum when Maky talks
- maky emphasize tradition
-Jonah say as big as the head of a baby bigger in gypsy
scene
- Jonah keep your sick voice, it's deeper😄
- Evan you are still three feet away from Sydney during
dress scene
- dance with wind as Kilroy runs with heart -Sydney walk quietly,
or we'll need different heels.
- Brooke set ladder silently at end
I think Riley should say "what do you want" differently each time. to me it sounds repetitive.
ReplyDeleteKeep working hard and going 100% every time. We got this
ReplyDeleteI'll work on the deep voice and reacting.
ReplyDeletewhat does "no boobs on kadyn" mean???!
ReplyDeletei think the gaurds should tey to be more mean
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